week-long holidays , good or bad ?what’s your opinion ?
our national day is coming . we shall have days of r est , presumably weeklong holidays again just like the weeklong may day holidays . many people welcome weeklong holidays and ar e bu sy planning wher e and how to spend the seven days ; wher eas many other people do not applaud . as to me, weeklong holidays mean a span of dullness , bor edom, melancholy and helples sness , and i think anyone who had expe rienced the holiday suf ferings in may would sha re my feelings .
i well r emember that from may day , to be mor e exact , a few days ea rlie r than may day , the shopping season sta rt ed . most s hops extended their shopping hours to r espond to their ove rwhelmingly enth usiastic cu stomers . t her e were special sales with discount coupons and instant lucky dr aws and various sales promotion s in near ly every big store to lure potential custome rs into s pending more . crowds of s hoppe rs flocked towards depa rtment stores , enjoying their high pur - chasing power .
there wer e t raffic jams almost everywhere , people waited in long queues at bus-stop s and t axi-stands , looking entir ely exhausted . temper s flar ed when people got pu shed or if someone else cut the queue . impatient driver s honked at each other every now and then .
the r ailway station was congested with t ravelers who rus hed to the platform like a swa rm of bees and then squeezed their way into the t rain for seats as if ther e would be no tomor -row .
in the restaur ants , tables were shared . a platoon of waiters filed out f rom the kitchen armed with va riou s containers of eatables . orders wer e taken feverishly and then shouted across to the kitchen . excit ement reigned everywhere as waiters r an hithe r and thither to fill the orders .
the above are just some vivid scenes that happened a few months ago . everywhere was chaos and chaos everywhere . i am really af raid the dr ama will soon be r epeated .
true , weeklong holidays help activate economy , but what about after-holiday depression ? no doubt , people can have a lot of leisur e, b ut leis ur e does not always bring a lot of pleasure .
本文是一篇议论文。作者首先在第一段中摆出了对长假的两种不同的看法以及作者自己的态度。第二部分包括四小段,每段均以作者亲身经历以及耳闻目睹的事实论证作者在第一段 中的观点, 例证真实而生动。末二段为以上各段的小结, 最后一段是结论, 再次论证作者的观点, 十分有力。
advantages of getting a loan from the bank for my studies
i am a college student f rom a farme r’s family in a mountaineous area . a year ago , i was admitted to a famous univer - sity . befor e ente ring the unive rsity , i was told tha t the necessary expenses during my four year s’study would cost nearly fifty thousand yuan . my parents had collected all the money ther e was to collect , including the money bor rowed f rom their relatives , but it was hardly enough to meet the needs . t hen , good news came that i could resor t to the bank for a loan . i thought it was a good idea and so i did it .
my decision was based on the following con sider ations : first , with the loan i can pay the tuition and support my life on the campus .
secondly , i don’t have to depend on my par ents who are always wor rying about the enormou s family expenditur e .thirdly , i will always have the pr ess ure upon me which forces me to study the hard way .
four thly , i have to live a very simple life and save every coin possible . t o sooner liquidat e the debt , i sometimes work as a home tutor , sometimes a door-to-door salesman , sometimes a restaur ant waiter .
fifthly , while doing par t-time jobs , i have accumulated a lot of social experience , bitt er sometimes , sweet occasionally , but happy all the time .
i think the above ar e the advantages the loan f rom the bank has brought to me . t hey are beneficial not only to my studies at the unive rsity but also to my future career , because i firmly believe in the saying“ har sh life produces a diligent and intelligent man .”
本文是一篇记叙文。作者以第一人称来写, 首先记叙希望助学贷款之由来, 主体部分列出了助学贷款之五大优点。最后一句引言“ 艰苦的生活能培养出勤奋而有智慧的人”结束全文。这类题目的写作必须整理出几条轻重相当的优点, 每条优点的表达意义要完整, 可用一句、两句或多句来写。本文较适合六级水平。